Monday, April 28, 2014

Perry Jackson: Daughter of Thethys

 P.S. ignore the genderbent Reyna it was a mistake. But if  you're wondering his name is Renye.:)


                                                                         The last thing I remember was the cherry coke. I should never have drank it. '' Perry... Perry... Perry wake up  come on.'' I opened my eyes,a boy with honey blonde hair and stormy grey eyes was shaking me.Oh no, he looked exactly  like a boy Annabeth. Panic fills my chest. Where am I?'' Oh good you're up'' .He said.'' Come Hayes,Jasmine,Flora,Leah,Nicole and Peter are waiting.When we got to the deck everyone waved at us.'' Hey Antonio.'' A girl with curly black hair, a tool belt and a psychotic grin approached us.'' I want to show you something me and Hesta have been working on.''she flicked a switch on the wall,the dragon figurehead opened it's mouth and a thick metal rod came from inside of it.It opened up like a fan and I realized that it was a satellite.Leah took a tablet from her tool belt, pressed an app and the map  appeared  onscreen.'' Cool Leah,'' Antonio smirked.'' Better than most of your inventions.'' Leah's face started to turn red.'' So there was a couple of leaks. Hesta is a complicated piece of machinery,even for me.'' She turned to me.'' So miss queen-of-ocean where are we.'' I concentrated hard.'' Two kilometers from the shore of France.In the Bay of Biscay.Twenty miles from Paris.''After I said that I looked at everyone.'' What are waiting for,to the city of love we go.'' If we get into trouble then my friends are too.I need to protect everyone here... even if that means I have to make a sacrifice,
                                                                  

3 comments:

  1. '...' Uh............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ it's fine................................... except grammar.

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  2. I thought it was a good idea. Eh, Haters gonna Hate,right?

    ~ Silvie

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  3. I actually had to research the bay of Biscay thing WWHHYYY!!!!!!!!

    ~ Quicksilver

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