It was dark. Real dark. I had a job. I was the right one for it. I was ready. I got going, running out of the building. I then got on my motorcycle and started it up."Target found on 5th Avenue," I said.What I was hunting was for the government, top secret."I have the target locked," I said. I might as well ran over the car completly, buuut I didn't.BAM!!
"Aaaaaahhhhhhhh!"
"OK stick your hands up now"
"Never.Not to the likes of you
""OK lets get dirty"
"Bring it"
"OK lets go!"
BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZTTTTT!!!!!"Whoa!"
''Not so powerful now are you human?''
''Well it's time to get dirty!"
Wednesday, September 25, 2013
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The Art and Aspirations of a Commenter
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some information can be of harm to others, intentionally or unintentionally. As a
commenter, I therefore aspire to participate responsibly in the great online conversation
by:
* treating all bloggers with respect.
* seeking first to understand what is being said.
* celebrating another's accomplishments.
* using school appropriate language.
* rephrasing ideas in the blog that made me think, made me feel, or helped me learn
to let the blogger know his/her voice has been heard.
* commenting specifically and positively, without criticism. If I disagree, I will
comment appropriately, politely stating my perspective.
* being mindful always that I may be a role model to my audience, especially if they
are younger than I.
* making no reference to, link to, and/or giving access to any information that may
be inappropriate for a school setting.
* asking at least one question in my comment with the hopes of continuing a
conversation and deepening thinking.
* using a triple check before submitting any comment: Would I be happy to have my
mother read this comment? My grandmother? My favorite teacher?
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I'm awesome. Signed Gavin aka Number 4
ReplyDeleteAwesome story and expressions signed Vishal
ReplyDeleteGreat Story Gavin! Can't wait to read more! :)
ReplyDelete~Aril
i love the suspense!
ReplyDeleteDaisy
Your probably not as awesome as you claim to be (JK) but your story sure is!
ReplyDeleteP.S. Alright, I admit it, you might be kind of awesome. But you would be even more awesome if you were an alien killing bounty hunter in reality! Great story! Totally awesome! :)
Daisy