Monday, September 30, 2013

The dark side of the moon

The dark side of the moon
 
 
 
 
     One fine day Josh and his two friends Mitchael and Cory where playing football at the Field. When something fell from the sky. "Hey guys come cheek this out." Mitchael said. Josh and Cory scurried over. "It looks like a video game." said Cory.
     "I don't think we should touch it." But Cory had already pulled the lever. All the sudden the Field started to change shape from a blue Sunny sky to thick black. Then they saw a green and orange colored figures. Cory immediately pulled back the lever. And they went back to the football Field. "Cory!" "I thought i told you not to touch it!" 
     "Sorry" so then the boys told their parents what had happened. their parents told NASA. Then about one month later NASA had the devise and three well trained astronauts ready to go see the aliens. But they discovered that any living organism within 50 feet would go to the strange place with the astronauts. Josh, Mitchael, and Cory where invited to see the astronauts go to the strange place. Then Josh told his Friends to put on space gear "why." asked Cory. "shh." said Josh "we are are going to go to." He whispered.
     Then they crouched behind some space gear. when the astronaut puled the lever every thing changed again. Then the astronauts puled out their ray guns. When they saw the first alien they shot it with their ray gun. But nothing happened then the alien shot green Slime at all of the astronauts and the astronauts immediately designated the alien took the devise and ran away. Mitchael gasped "now we are stuck here." "We are domed" "No we are not" said Josh confidently. "We must get that remote back." 
     Then they chased down the alien. then Cory tackled the alien it tried to shoot the green slime but Cory dodged it. then the alien turned into warp speed but Cory grabbed the alien and Josh grabbed Cory and Mitchael grabbed Josh. the next thing they knew was a big place with lots of more aliens. Then they where taken into what seemed a throne room. a HUGE alien was there then he shouted ekkaagnhj. "What did he say." Asked Mitchael. then they where taken to a big pit then the alien tossed them in the pit. Then they put a cover on. "What do we do now." Asked Cory. "We wait until they take us out of here." Replied Josh. When they where finally where taken out of the pit they where given a lot of alien things like an computer. "An alien computer i never would have guessed." Said Mitchael. And they even gave them the remote to get back home. then the alien stuck his hand out. "What dues he want" asked Cory "a trade" said Josh  "we do not have anything to trade" "yes we do air." Then they gave the aliens some of their air. then they pulled the lever. Then when they come home every one thought the aliens turned the astronauts into kids. Then they sunk away when no one was looking and put the stuff in the lab. And went back with their parents "where where you" "in the bathroom" they said quickly. And they went home.                                      
    

1 comment:

  1. This kept me on the edge of my seat! This would make a great share with the class :)

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