Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Hearts Collide Chapter 3

                                           Chapter 3

                                                   A Fateful Action

       Jenna was ready to scream with frustration. She dialed Jaques' number for what felt like the hundredth time.
        ''Come on please, please!'' she whispered as the phone rang.
          ''Hi, you've reached Jaques, call you later,bye!
          ''No!No!No!No!No! yelled Jenna.
          It was at that moment,she made a decision that might very well end her relationship with Jaques forever.
          Twenty minutes later, Jenna stood in front of Frankies house. She took a deep breath, and pushed the doorbell. Much to soon, the door opened.
           ''Hey Frankie.''
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  1. AnonymousOctober 9, 2013 at 11:25 AM

    I see where this is going, nice stoy line!
    laura

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