Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Moving day

Moving day
 
 
The day we moved I had had a birthday party the day before. And I got sick but we still had to move because we had planed to move a sold week ago so I had to go sick. It was a miserable day I could not stop throwing up no mater how much medicine my mom gave me I could not stop. We drove hundreds and hundreds of miles my brother kept asking "where are we going" and "are we there yet." He is so inpatient. My two one year old sisters well all they did is sleep, eat, and poop sleep, eat, and poop. And the worst thing of all was I get car sick. At the hotel I though up an uncountable number of times. I could not stop. And this went on for three more days. By the time we Finlay got to Texas my brother said I puked over 234 times. What a bad day.   
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  1. Dr. RaymondOctober 2, 2013 at 2:58 PM

    Wow Andrew....you were super sick. Your writing was descriptive and it was easy for me to see that. Also, I could really hear your voice in your writing. Great work.
    Dr. Raymond

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