Wednesday, November 13, 2013
Just Desert
Clara lowered her knife, and pumpkin glowed even brighter. She then, with a mighty force, cut the pumpkin in half. It stopped glowing immedieately. She thought she heard screams of a girl. She peered into the eccentric pumpkin, and saw, fresh, blood! She screamed and screamed. Memories poured into her mind. Memories, of her dead children, who she murdered. She never wanted to have children, but she had. She cursed and cursed at her children. She then had enough. She did horrible stuff to them.She blew them up in a bomb blast. She felt an evil spirit of the dead rushing through her every direction. She then saw her son, Charlie. he was 4 when she murdered him. He had pale white skin. "THE REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he screamed so loud. She screamed louder and ran to a room. She took her knife with her. She saw her dog. He was blocking the room way. "GET AWAY YOU FURRY MUTT!!!!!!" she had no time for him so she stabbed him. She locked herself in the room. She backed into a corner. She turned all the lights on, but, the lightbulbs bursted. A piece of glass pierced her skin. She wailed in pain. She saw her daughter, Melanie. She was 10. She had pale white,skin. "THE REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed. Clara stormed in her closet. She heard nothing for a long time. Suddenly, she saw, her blood.
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That was an awesome horror story V and P!!!!! Gavin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the ending of this piece. Suspensful!
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