Wednesday, November 20, 2013
How it ended.
Mavis and Harly were running. They had blood all over their hands. They ran and ran. 1 day later, they were found lying on the railroad tracks, dead, runover by a train. Doctors say that somebody forced them their. (Before the death of Mavis and Harly). They were in a church. They were not really religious. They were stalking an old lady who arrested their dad. The lady was leaving,they grabbed her, tied her up, and did horrible things to her. Before she died, she muttered, I will haunt you to death was what she said. They ran after they buried her. They worked in a station. They heard voices, voices saying that they will die. At first, they thought they were hallucinating. but then, they saw the old lady, sitting on the chair, in the air? They ran back, so scared, but all of a sudden, they got pushed in the track. That was how it ended.
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