Monday, December 16, 2013



       Titanic II Part 1

          
          I'm about to board Titanic II. I know it's scary that it's called that. We all know what happened to the Titanic! You're probably wondering why it's called Titanic II. Well, it was named that because a survivor from the Titanic built this ship. 

          At first my mom was scared to go on the ship, but my dad told her to man up. After we got our tickets, we got on the ship. The steward told us our tickets were fake, so we had to get new ones.  After my dad said a few choice words with the steward, we got on the ship.

1 comment:

  1. How did you get the fake tickets in the first place?
    -Esther

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