I lay face down in the sand. My clothes were wet and soggy from the water that washed over me. I finally look up at the strange island that I stood on. I didn't know who I was or how I got here. All I knew was that I was not on Earth. The plants that surrounded me were a dark shade of purple and the water was grey as the sky. It was getting dark and I needed to find shelter. I slowly limped to the rather purple forest and went into the dark path that had been formed by some animal or person. Suddenly I heard rustling behind the bushes. I ran behind the trees and peered towards the rustling bushes.
A teenage girl walked out but she was not normal. She had blue skin and looked like Avatar from the movie. "Anyone there"? She called. I didn't know if I should say something but she didn't look harmful or anything. So I said " H h h hello". The girl looked at my direction as I came out. "Who are you "? She said nervously. "I don't know but I won't hurt you"! I said confidently. "Alright well your not from here are you"? "No I don't think so". "How'd you get here"? "I'm sorry but I don't remember anything". "You promise you won't hurt me or my or my family"? "I promise". "Okay follow me to my village". I walked slowly my leg was hurting really badly. "Sorry to ask but do you have any medical or first aid stuff"? I said embarrassingly. "Yeah of course"! She said smoothly. We finally got to the village and I was limping badly.
All of a sudden the Avatar people as I call them surrounded me and they were in a tight circle. "NO don't hurt him he's my friend that I he found by the beach"! "He might dangerous you never know Tara"! It looked like the captain who was talking. "Daddy I promise you that he won't hurt us he even said so at the beach"! "Fine Tara but I'm watching him"! The captain said. "Hey can I call you Jack". She said excitedly to me."Sure I don't mind"."Awesome"! She shouted me ."Oh I almost forgot about your injury here let me take you to the first aid tent" "Thanks". I said as I felt relieved.
Wednesday, January 22, 2014
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