Friday, January 3, 2014

The Fox

                                                  Creeping through the trees,
                                                  red  tail  swaying  in  the  air,
                                                          a red fox is near.

4 comments:

  1. I love these short animal poems! Beautiful :)

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  2. I absolutely ADORE haiku's. I hope you make more. (Coincidentally, my two favorite things are haiku's and animals, you put those together. My dream is a reality! *Yay!*) -Sara (Even though i love minecraft, i like haiku's better. poetry rocks.)

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  3. wow! You're so good at poems! :)
    I'm personally not good at haikus...
    Amazing writing waytago
    I love foxes :3!

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