Friday, January 3, 2014

The Peacock

                                                            Magnificent bird,
                                                     lifting up his crest above,
                                                          the king of all birds.

6 comments:

  1. wonderful poem!!!! i like how you described the peacock

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  2. wonderful poem!!!! i like how you described the peacock

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  3. Your poems are GORGEOUS! Love it. Keep it up! -Sara

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  4. Oh. My. Gosh. You charm us right in by using your poems. It paints a detailed and scenic picture in my mind. The poem The peacock was such... how would you say it... um... I don't know but each time I read it, it has like, your own personal charm inside of it. I don't know how you do that, but somehow, you do! (Tell me how to do it!) Anyway, simply wonderful!

    --Alysa

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  5. Your poems are so good. Keep making poems
    -Bliss

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