Wednesday, February 12, 2014

After Frozen #3

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While Olaf sang to Anna, Elsa was in deep trouble. She was caught in a blizzard and her ice powers wouldn't work because her hands were frozen. "ANNA!, HELP ME!" she cried as the blizzard slowly collapsed on her.
     Meanwhile, Anna recovered from her frostbite but didn't feel right. "I need to go tell Elsa its time to come home." Said Anna as she walked to the telephone. She called four times but Elsa never awnserd. "Thats it! I'm going to Elsa!" Said Anna.
      While Anna packed, Kristoff came and told Anna she couldn't go. "Too bad!'' She said running to the private jet with Olaf.
      When Anna and Olaf got there they saw what happened. Elsa was on the ground, covered in snow, and still whispering, "Anna, save me.'' Anna and Olaf carried Elsa to the private jet and flew back home and to the doctor.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2014 at 12:37 PM

    i love your detail

    -sophia

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2014 at 5:32 PM

    I like how you imagined what would be after the real Frozen movie and you used lots of details to describe what happened.
    -Bliss

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2014 at 5:36 PM

    I like how you used lots of details to describe what happened. I also like that you
    posted Let it Go to match with the scenery that Elsa is in.
    -Bliss

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2014 at 5:38 PM

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  5. AnonymousMarch 12, 2014 at 3:36 PM

    COOL! The idea of After Frozen is soooooo cool! ( I know I already said this though.) -- Alysa

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