Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Kacy's horrible dream Part 2

"Umm...,so mom I might have been very hungry and I might have fell asleep in the kitchen and ummm...I might have had a dream about Elsa, Anna , Kristoff, and Olaf," said Kacy. What!," said Kacy's mom. "Ummm...I said might mom," said Kacy. Kacy and her mom were
at the dining table eating chocolate chip pancakes with extra syrup on the top while Kacy was trying to make up a excuse that was true and not true at the same time. She didn't want her mom to freak out just like she did herself. "Hello Kacy are you there?," asked Kacy's mom. "Oh yeah mom I was just thinking about something.""Thinking about what?" "Nothing," answered Kacy. "Well sweetie
you still need an explanation to tell what happened through the night," said Kacy's mom."But nothing happened through the night. I think it was just a scary dream about Elsa, Anna, Kristoff, and Olaf. "Ohh fine!," said Kacy's mom I beileive you,but I'm still going to watch over you when you sleep and wherever you go. "Mom you don't have to do that . I'm pretty sure it was just a dream."
Just then at the window some frost appeared and it spelled"we'll be back" and Olaf's face appeared at the window.....Ahhhhhhhhh!
To Be Continued........Olaf the Snowman                                            
                                                     
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2014 at 12:02 PM

    Whoa. This is like a mix of fanasty and horror. I really like the cliffhanger in the end!

    -- Alysa

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2014 at 12:08 PM

    Hey it's Mathew i think you added good detail to your book, and hopefully you make a new one you really hooked me

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