Wednesday, February 5, 2014
Minetrapped! Chapter 6: Trying to get me out
Lucky for me my dad is a technician. If someone saw us, they would probably go nuts. We communicated by sending notes. By communicating back, I acted out. ( We eventually got the hang of it.) My dad did everything he could, but no such luck. My mom and brother did nothing but panic and go crazy. By the time it was morning, the leader of the village woke up. when he saw what happened, his eyes slowly got bigger and bigger. ( Well, it seemed like it...) If I could read his mind, it would probably say, " Now I see why he wants to get out." My dad put up a sign saying, " i can't get you out. But we'll find a way soon. I hope. Love from Dad. I sighed. but my brother quickly jotted something down. It said, " Okay little bro. I'm gonna get the laptop and get to your world. I think this could work."
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commenter, I therefore aspire to participate responsibly in the great online conversation
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comment appropriately, politely stating my perspective.
* being mindful always that I may be a role model to my audience, especially if they
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be inappropriate for a school setting.
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conversation and deepening thinking.
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Great story!except you did lowercase I instead of uppercase I. -speedy
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