Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Minetrapped! Chapter 8: Under the veil

Once we were close enough to the U.P.O, it was in a forest clearing. As we got closer I saw black.

Closer...

An oval-like shape standing up.

Closer...

Purple swirls. Lots of them.

Closer...

I could now see it all: A Nether portal. The leader's eyes got huge and started to dart around nervously. I slowly turned to him. My brother did too. He gasped. ( Well, at least I think he did...) I turned back to face the leader. His eyes...

They were white.

He was getting possessed by HEROBRINE.

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