They saw a man looking down while smoking. They carefully climbed out of the sewer without making a noise. The man looked up for a split second and saw the girls, then he started shouting. The girls guessed that some people would come chasing after them so they started running. Then there was a at least twenty men chasing after them. Some of them were in cars, but most of them were on foot. "Turn in to the alley," Bella exclaimed. Then they turned into the alley that was to small for the cars. The girls were relived that they got rid of the cars. They started running out of the dirty city. One of the girls tripped.The girl was Katy .The girls left the girl behind without knowing she tripped. They saw tall grass and dove in it.
To be continued...
Wednesday, February 26, 2014
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Needs details. Lots of details. Why do you make the letters so big? Why don't you make longer stories? It's a bit.... y'know.... boring. Well, maybe lots boring. And it has no details. It's like... "Oh, I'm here.".... "Now I'm here", kinda things. Oh, but mostly MAKE THE LETTERS SMALLER! It's more interesting. You should go past the letter limit, for details. Seriously, THEY SAW TALL GRASS?! It's kind of boring. Just saying, -Anonymous Person
ReplyDeleteHmmm...a story about a kidnapping and maybe rape.Seem's legit.
ReplyDelete~Quicksilver