Wednesday, February 12, 2014

                      The Fire Palace

                            Chapter 2

    "Good day all of Trigon! Welcome to the opening of the gates! The princess is soon to come!" Max introduced the princess. She is the most beautiful woman I've ever seen. The princess was the same age as I.
Her dress was long and silky.She was perfect. People say she is mid-evil or even cursed with sorcery. She didn't look either of those things though.
   Then all of a sudden I remembered this part of my dream and then it started. As soon as she was starting to speak someone in the crowd shouted "Witch!" Then another and another and another. She finally blew her top.
   Her eyes turned red, her hands caught fire and she shot it at a flag on top of the castle which did the same as her hands did.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2014 at 12:33 PM

    Intresting. I can't wait where the story leads! =] Charlette M.

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  2. UnknownFebruary 12, 2014 at 12:37 PM

    I like your taste in writing it keeps me on the edge of my seat!!!Reagan

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2014 at 6:11 PM

    wow!can't wait until the next one! -speedy gonzales

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2014 at 10:15 AM

    I like your story and I can't wait to read what will happen next!
    -Bliss

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  5. AnonymousMarch 5, 2014 at 12:02 PM

    in the first one the picture was different,it confuses me. -speedy gonzales

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