Wednesday, February 19, 2014

The Tale of the Flying Pig Part Five

When Pig landed on Mars, the whole planet was a beautiful red. Pig immediately leaped from the rocket and landed peacefully on the ground causing hardly any dust to fly. He picked up a empty jar and started collecting. " Oh my gosh," groaned Pig " My back hurts so bad." He suddenly stopped in his tracks and saw an alien aquarium. Maybe there's food and a place to rest, he thought. He went in, found some coins miraculously in his pocket. He went in and made a beeline straight to the food court. He ate just like a bear, and after he finished his food, he decided to sightsee the fishes. When he came to one tank, he noticed that it was full of mermaids and the mermaids tails, arms and body had wheels on them. Right when Pig wasn't looking, all the mermaids jumped out of the tank and started " skating " towards him. Horrified, he watched as the mermaids legs turn into human legs and their human legs still had wheels on them. Without being asked twice, he bolted to the door. Then the mermaids started singing. " Oh no, cried Pig, " they're singing Voices of the Mermaids." Pig knew that he could stay there forever if he listened to it. He ripped off part of his clothing and stuffed it into his ear. But the mermaids song probably affected the fishes and suddenly they all jumped out of their tank and transformed just like the mermaids, but instead of their legs turning into human skin, their whole body became human ( they even have hair ). Pig pushed the door to the aquarium and ran into the rocket.

3 comments:

  1. Hey it's Mathew i think it is creepy how there was a pig on mars,but look on the bright side i like creepy things

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  2. Hahahahahahahahaha-gio

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  3. That is so cool!! Awesome ideas!!!!!!!!!!!

    - Adria

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