Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Warriors storys #3

As Fireheart and Cloudpaw Raced back to the ravine, Fireheart ran and leaped on to the Great Rock and yowled, "Run, Go to Riverclan camp! Tigerstar is attacking!" Everyone ran out of camp except Bluestar. She was curled up in her den, tears falling off her face. "Bluestar, Run! Tigerstar is atta...!" Yowled Fireheart as Bluestar interrupted him. "I Heard you, Fireheart; My time has come, I am on my last life. There is no use for me, You will be a great leader." She murmured shaking. "No!" Fireheart meowed as he picked Bluestar up by her muzzle. "LET ME GO!" She yowled. Fireheart ignored her and ran to the river. He saw his clan waiting sacredly by the camp. He swam with all his might. He crossed the river and was safely in Riverclan camp.
         The next day Sandstorm and Fireheart went and checked out the camp. "Your closest mate will do something unexpected." Spottedleaf's words echoed in his head as he walked to the camp. There were claw marks that spelled out "WATCH YOUR BACK FIREHEART. ONCE I FIND YOU, YOU'LL BE CROWFOOD."

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