Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Mystery of the Missing Doll:Part 1

My doll is missing.Her name is Lacy.You might have seen her.I know why she ran away.Last night was my 6th birthday.I got a new doll,Lacy didn't like her.So last night I woke up shivering.The window was open.Lacy was staring at me with hideous red glaring eyes.I screamed with all my might.Lacy disappeared as my mom came in panicking."Lacy's gone"I sobbed."No sweetie she is right-huh?Where did you put Lacy?"She asked."I didn't lose her-she ran away!"I said as my sadness turned to anger."That's impossible"she chuckled."NO IT'S NOT!!!!!!"I roared.My mom quickly walked away.So I did it,the next night I ran away to find Lacy.I looked in a small window.There I heard a creak,as a door inside opened, revealing Lacy.She saw me with her red beady eyes.She walked toward the bed where a sleeping girl lay.Lacy flashed a toothy grin at me as she scribbled on the window with her icy hands,spelling,"I'm not your doll anymore".She walked to the bed,"no Lacy"I cried.She nodded her head,her blond curls bouncing.Now there was no way of getting Lacy back.....                                                                To Be Continued... 
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  1. AnonymousMarch 19, 2014 at 11:55 AM

    hey its mathew and dennis we just want to say how good your story is i think you added really good detail

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