Wednesday, March 26, 2014

single flair

                                                                                                                                                                (ignore that thing couldn't get off)
                                                      Chapter 2
   I was staring out the window wondering when I would wake up.  but something told it wasn't a dream.  if it was a dream I wouldn't be able to taste my dessert.  I swallowed my cherry whole, I could feel the goo running down my throat.  then out of the corner of my eye I saw something move, OUTSIDE! I knew what i had to do.

    I ran as close as I dared to the moving object,willing my self to turn into a cat.  As I stared at the figure I noticed something, he looked like a hawk?  the "hawk" told me not to struggle, but of course being me I did. and I must have screamed as well because it dropped me.  the world went black

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