To be continued...
Saturday, March 1, 2014
Taken part 5
People were running all around them. Then one of them turned in there direction. He started walking toward them. He was coming close. He came even closer and the girls knew that they had been found then when he was a centimeter away he turned around and walked away. They all moved further away until they were out of sight. Then all the girls stood up. "Is everyone okay asked," asked Hanah. Just then they noticed that one of the girls was missing. Then all the girls were wondering one thing. Where was one of the girls. They all started searching but no one could find the missing girl. Finally Bella said "We better go back and search for her," But then one of the girls stopped her. "we better go and find help, and then search for her," Exclaimed Rachel, so they all started running back to get help. They kept on running until they found cars. Then they followed the cars.
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Mathew and Dennis, Reread this. You'll find quite a lot of mistakes. Ok, Sara.|:<
ReplyDeleteNo offense, but I kind of have to agree with Sara. You'll see some mistakes here and there, but I guess the story is okay...
Delete-- Lisa
Some issues with usage, but engaging story line nonetheless... Mrs.Goins
ReplyDeleteThis does not connect to part 4. Needs work.
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