They continued there journey to find there homes so they could get help from there parents. So they walked across the grass lands hoping to find there parents. When they continued walking they saw a black van coming behind them. It was a kidnapper. The girls sprinted as fast as they could. The black car sped up.They went deeper into the tall grass. As they went deeper into the tall grass the tallest girl saw the highway. They started running for the highway. Once a car slowed down ,and the car was a Denali. The guy rolled down the windows and asked them "What do you girls need?" Rachel said crying"Some peaple just took us could we borrow your phone'' The guy said"No,i'll call the police to come get you girls."
To be continued...
Wednesday, March 19, 2014
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Oh good! I was worried this was going to be another person that they couldn't trust :) Mrs.Goins
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