Wednesday, March 19, 2014

The Fire Palace


                   The Fire Palace

                      Chapter 11
       The next day, sky's were clear and everything was perfect. We'll, not everything. Avery was very ill. He was throwing up, his temp. was around 102.91. Lizzy was rushing around the house in a panic. Avery was trying to calm he down, and was failing. "Calm down. Calm down. It will all be okay." 
       "No it won't! You're sick, and won't let me go out to gather ingredients to make medicine!" 
      "Calm down!"
       "I can't!" Lizzy was sobbing!
       "Fine!"
       "You mean, you'll let me go out?"
     "I never said that. Call Green Claw and tell him the things you need. One stomp is all it takes." Avery coughed, and Lizzy screeched. She final calmed and stomped. 
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  1. UnknownMarch 22, 2014 at 7:07 AM

    I'm excited to see where this goes....are you doing some research into natural remedies? It would be cool to put some authentic ones into your story!
    Mrs.Goins

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