Wednesday, March 5, 2014

The fire palace

                      The Fire Palace

                           Chapter 5

  I knew we would be safe in the middle of the forest. 
 Slowly, the princess awoke. "Where am I? How did I get here? Who are you?" The Princess asked in a worried voice. "Is this...this the slammer? I can't die in the slammer!" The Princess whaled. "I am Avery Tridon. You are not in the slammer. You are in a secret tower where you will be safe."
 "Hi...Avery...I...am...I...am...Princess Elizabeth. Just, just call me Lizzy."  

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