Wednesday, March 5, 2014

The fire palace

                    The Fire Palace

                        Chapter 8

  Soon after that Avery and Lizzy grew a bond stronger than the strongest steel. They loved each other very much. One day, Lizzy asked to meet Avery's parents. "Lizzy, I know you do, but everyone will find you and take you away from me. I love you very much and I'd hate to be departed with-
  "Shh. I love you too. Why don't you bring them here?" 
  "What a wonderful idea. I will be back." Avery made three loud thudding sounds. Two dragons flew in and he jumped out the window landing on Green Claw, and he flew off. 

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  1. UnknownMarch 22, 2014 at 7:32 AM

    Can you elaborate on what happened to strengthen their bond? I feel as if I am missing something...
    Mrs.Goins

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