Monday, March 31, 2014
The Four Elements: To...?
Jay's horse went clippity cloppity. Everyone swayed to the horse's movements. Oliver was still bleeding, but he had managed to ride along with them. His left arm wasn't his sword arm, so that was good. Blake was wearing the Flame around his neck. The Flame was an orangey-red shade. It glittered in the light. Hmm... Jay thought. I wonder what we're going to go next... "We're going to go meet long lost explorers Silvia and Borne. Last time we tracked them, they were in Lorandia." Jay smiled. It was his hometown. It would be good to see his family and friends again. Oliver continued. "We will go east." Everyone started to follow Oliver. Oliver's arm had stopped bleeding. Oliver talked as they were riding. "The Wind is supposed to be on a pillar on top of a mountain, Mount Makoniji, to be exact. Cutting through Lorondia is the best way and the most efficient way to get to our destination." Everyone nodded. They ventured forth.
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