Wednesday, March 19, 2014

The Tale of the Flying Pig Part Seven

KABOOM! As soon as the hurricane hit, Pig knew that he made a big mistake of hiding under the protector was a big mistake. He couldn't come out if he kept staying in there. He knew that sooner or later he would be blown away. Pig then suddenly came out of the protector, amazed by his own bravery. He took a deep breath, and jumped out of the Great Red Spot. He then saw that one of the wands were taken by someone or something as he jumped out. He couldn't wait to tell Mouse his adventures  on Jupiter. When Mouse heard, he went green with envy. He decided that he wouldn't help Pig anymore. But Mouse pretended to go along with the plan.

1 comment:

  1. Is there a bit more detail you could add to transition pig getting back to mouse? I feel like he escaped danger, but I am not quite sure how...
    Mrs.Goins

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