Elsa was almost frozen. While Anna flew the jet, Olaf kept Elsa okay. "Elsa, say,"In Summer." Elsa's voice was a faint whisper. "In su..." Elsa stopped. Suddenly little ice charms grew on Elsa's skin. "I'll go fetch the blow dryer. "Fast, Ola..." She chocked out. Icicles grew on her neck. "PSSSSSHHHHH" Went the blow dryer. "PCHHH" The blow dryer suddenly stopped. The plane landed. Everything flew forward even Elsa. "HELP MEEEEEEEEEEE!" Yelled Anna from the front. Elsa jumped out of the plane and fell on the 3 foot drop. She ran as fast as she could. To Olaf, her running was limping. She finally got in front of the moving plane. She blasted out powers. It stopped the plane, and nearly killed her. She dropped on the ground. Days later she woke up in the Hospital. She was fine. She had everything back...almost.
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