Friday, June 27, 2014

Knights of time and space: The beginning

T.A.R.D.I.S.

"Remind me why I agreed to come with you of all people?" Nick asked as him and I trekked to the back of the school." Well you want to meet my friend, don't you?'' I said. when we got to the back wall I heard the fimilier sound of the TARDIS.''W- What was that? Charity, your scaring me!'' I smiled at him.'' Just wait and see.'' Suddenly, there was a big flash and the whring stopped. The door opened, fog and light coming into view,huh typical.A silhouette of a man appeared in the doorway." Doctor,'' I said, ''There's no time for this I saw some weeping angels on the way here.''
''Time?I can give you all the time in the world if you ask!'' He answered. I was about to make a remark when Nick interrupted."Um... Charity what's going on?''  Doctor seemed to have noticed Nick for the first time.He gave Nick a puzzled look.''Who is this and why is he here?'' I took a deep breath, hopefully this doesn't backfire. "Doctor this is Nick. His parents are out of town for business. I invited him to stay here, have an extra companion, the more the merrier right?" The Doctor looked at me than at Nick. He sighed "I suppose he can until his parents are back, I could always use another companion." I lead Nick out of the console room,'' Come on.'' I said.'' I'll show you my room." 


Again, rest coming soon.

Silvie out.

2 comments:

  1. Sorry, but I don't exactly get it. And drop the cool. And Silvie. Sounds weird, no offense.

    --Lisa

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  2. I'm just trying to get good comments, I'm not exactly a good writer. The 'cool' advise was from my friend Zoe. and I got the nickname 'Silvie' From a ask blog called "don't ask ''Silverlay". And watch Doctor Who,if you already do than I'm making this un-pulisized ( is that a word?) episodes of Doctor Who. 11th.

    ~ Quicksilver

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