Wednesday, October 2, 2013
The Red Land: Chapter 2
"This is where you found it?"
"yes." I replied.
He examined the stone.
"It says something on it!" Joey exclaimed.
"Portal" I read.
Instantly, a ring of fire surrounded us. We were trapped.
3 comments:
The Art and Aspirations of a Commenter
I believe in the power of a free exchange of ideas. I also recognize that words or access to
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commenter, I therefore aspire to participate responsibly in the great online conversation
by:
* treating all bloggers with respect.
* seeking first to understand what is being said.
* celebrating another's accomplishments.
* using school appropriate language.
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* commenting specifically and positively, without criticism. If I disagree, I will
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* being mindful always that I may be a role model to my audience, especially if they
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* making no reference to, link to, and/or giving access to any information that may
be inappropriate for a school setting.
* asking at least one question in my comment with the hopes of continuing a
conversation and deepening thinking.
* using a triple check before submitting any comment: Would I be happy to have my
mother read this comment? My grandmother? My favorite teacher?
I hope this is story is going to continue! I am so curious to see what happens next.
ReplyDeletePortal.......wonder if this ring of fire is the portal........if it is, where does it lead........?
ReplyDelete-Ty
The Red Land... Duh...:D
Delete-Hunter