Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Something unexpected : Part 2

"Kate your a z-z-zombie!!!" Jane said shivering." But but how?" Kate moaned and groaned.  Suddenly Jane heard more moans. She turned around and saw her mom,dad,and the mailman! "Ahhhhh what's happening!" yelled Jane. She ran as fast as she could to her house. She ran past all the people in her town who were all zombies. Finally when she got to her house. She went to the garage to get the wood her dad had already cut out in case of  a hurricane. She grabbed the hammer and quickly put up the wood boards when she heard moaning. She ran outside to the bomb shelter in the backyard. Luckily there was food. As soon as Jane locked up the shelter she started texting her friends to see if one of them was not a zombie. She texted Isabelle, Kendall, and Storme. It had been 15 minutes since she sent the text but still no answer. Suddenly her phone rang. It was Storme." Omg it is so good to here your voice." said Jane.
"What's going on, Jane? Why are there zombies everywhere?"
"That does not matter right now. What matters is if your ok. Where are you?"
"I'm in my room with the door locked."
" Ok I'm coming over to your house so I can bring you back to my house. We can hide in my bomb shelter."
"Ok."
Jane quickly ran over to Storme's house which was 2 streets away. When she got there she knocked on the door once and Storme was there waiting. They ran as fast as they could back to the bomb shelter. "Are you ok?" Jane asked.
"Yes I'm fine but I'm scared Jane."
"Don't worry we will be fine if we stay in the shelter." 
 Suddenly.......the door burst open!

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