Wednesday, October 23, 2013

The Path to Dream World: Chapter 1, "The Feather-Filled Revenge"

     A scream echoed through the mansion...  It was coming from 7 year-old kate's room.  5 year-old genius twins Tyler and Aaron were standing in the doorway, holding pillows, ready to smack the bajeezus out of Kate.
    ''This is for spilling juice on my pants!''  Tyler exclaimed.
Kate ran out of the room and into the library.  The twins chased her and cornered her.
"We have you where we want you!"  Aaron said, with excitement.
Kate bumped into a bookshelf, and a book fell out and hit her in the head.
"Owie!"  She cried, with pain.
The twins picked up the book and read the title.
"Dream World"
"What's Dream World?" Kate asked.
"To get to Dream World, you have to get in a closet, close your eyes, and say ''Dream World'' 3 times." Aaron read.
"Wow!  I wanna go!" Kate said.
"Ok." The twins said with evil smirks on their faces.
"Aaron, hurry and get the video camera!  Everyone at daycare is gonna have to see this!"  Tyler whispered to Aaron.
     Kate got in the closet and closed her eyes.  Aaron pushed "Record" and then Kate said:
"Dream World"
"Dream World"
"Dream World."

3 comments:

  1. I like how you left this story hanging...

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  2. I love how you put some funny words in your story like bejeezes.

    ~Kasey~

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  3. I can't wait to here the next part. You left me hanging.

    Dennis K., Mathew P.

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