Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Somthing unexpected : Part 1

"Ahhhh!"  The Previous Day:
Jane just got off the school bus when she saw her best friend Kate."Hey Kate whats up?"asked Jane. "Nothing wait ohhh! I'm going to the bowling alley tommorrow if you want to come?"asked Kate.
"Sure what time?"
"2:00pm."
"Ok thanks."
                                                                

Today 2:00pm. Jane just got to the bowling alley............
"Kate, Kate, Kate?" Jane said in a panic voice. "Where is everybody?" "Hello?Anybody here?" Jane asked. When suddenly Jane saw Kate. Jane ran over to Kate. Jane tapped Kate's shoulder. "Hey Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

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