The closet doors shut.
"Oh my Zeus!" Aaron screamed.
The closet doors fell on Tyler, revealing a passed-out Kate.
"Ow" Tyler said as he rubbed his back. "At least it didn't hit my head."
The twins tried to wake Kate up, with Aaron still recording.
Suddenly, Kate started speaking.
"Where are Tyler and Aaron?" She sleptalked.
''KATE WAKE UP!" Tyler screamed.
As Tyler was screaming, Aaron wandered to the closet, with the camera pointed at himself.
"Dream World"
"Dream World"
"Dream World."
The camera dropped on the floor. Tyler turned his head, and was shocked to see Aaron's body lying on the ground.
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