Wednesday, October 23, 2013
The Perfect Date..A Cliffhanger
Jess was so happy, she had totally impressed her totally SECRET crush, Mallenfent. She was so sure he was going to ask her to the homecoming dance.With his slick, black hair, leather jacket, and leather boots, he looked as hot as a vampire.
The next day, Jess did land herself a date to homecoming, but it wasn't Mallenfent. It was Jake, her second crush, plain and boring Jake. They were going on a date before homecoming, so they could see how things went. The date went well, and Jess' father approved of Jake, said he "Thought Jake was a good boy."
Homecoming dance was exactly in 7.34 hrs and Jake was going to pick her up at 7:45 p.m.. 7.14 hrs later Jake picked her up. Where he took her was unknown, but one thing was for sure, Jake and Jess were not at the homecoming dance.
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So Mallenfent didn't ask her? Or will she run into him at the dance...
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