Wednesday, October 23, 2013

The Princess of Maldonia chapter 1

     Once upon a time there lived a beautiful princess named Adelline. Her mother, Queen Gabrielle, and her father, King Martin, called her Addie most of the time. When they had guests everyone called her Princess Adelline.
     One evening Addie and her little kitty-cat, named Precious, were looking out her bedroom window on the sevententh floor of their castle, and she saw a carrige drive over the grand bridge coming toward the castle. Addie picked up the castle moniter, that connects to the moniters in every room in the house, and said, "Father, father, someone's passing over the grand bridge." King Martin picked up the moniter in one of his many studies, and said,"I know darling, I know." " Who is it?" blurted Addie. No one answered the moniter. Addie says, "Hello, father?"
     Addie walked to the purr-fectly purple kitty-cat elevator, sat Precious on the floor, and pushed the ground floor button. Then she walked over to the big golden elevator and pushed ground floor button there too. Once she picked Precious off the floor of the purr-fectly purple kitty-cat elevator, she walked over to the grand front door of the castle and saw her father's cousin Elanor.

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