Wednesday, October 9, 2013

The red land: Chapter 5

     The man was coming towards us, with the golden sword still in his hand.  We had nothing to defend ourselves with. Joey exclaimed "Run!"
     We ran into the castle.  We went left, then right, then left again. We ran until we found ourselves in a giant room with thousands of the people surrounding a throne made of the same stone as the portal stone.  The man in the throne's eyes were closed.  But, there was a giant eye painted on his forehead.  He looked up at Joey and I and yelled "Who's there?"
All of the people looked at us.

2 comments:

  1. Is that guy on the throne a king? What does the eye on his forehead mean? MAKE PART SIX! -Ty

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  2. it's out now. part 7 will come out soon

    -Hunter

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