Wednesday, October 9, 2013
The red land: Chapter 5
We ran into the castle. We went left, then right, then left again. We ran until we found ourselves in a giant room with thousands of the people surrounding a throne made of the same stone as the portal stone. The man in the throne's eyes were closed. But, there was a giant eye painted on his forehead. He looked up at Joey and I and yelled "Who's there?"
All of the people looked at us.
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Is that guy on the throne a king? What does the eye on his forehead mean? MAKE PART SIX! -Ty
ReplyDeleteit's out now. part 7 will come out soon
ReplyDelete-Hunter