ordinarily not
Leo raced home tears streaking down her face. "That stupid Laina!!!" She quickly ran to her tree and grabbed an apple off one of the branches and did her homework in peace. WITH NO LAINA!!!
All of a sudden she heard a mooing in the distance. She looked out over the field.It was the motherless calf again. AND THE FOX!!!! "Oh no!!!" Leo cried. She jumped out of the tree and ran towards the noise.
( this might be the last chapter for a while, I am suffering of severe writers block)
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