Wednesday, November 6, 2013

The Odd World of Gavin:Chapter 1: The Man with the Truth

     Hunter woke up and knew something was wrong.
     "Morning Hunt,"said Carl the humpday camel.
     "Good morning Carl,"said Hunter. It was 1:00 in the morning and Carl had made breakfast.BOOM!!!!!!. "Carl, run!" Hunter yelled. He grabbed a sword and started slashing blindly at whoever or whatever it was.
     "I got a frieing pan Hunter........what day is it...........................Humpdaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!"
     "Carl come here and let's get out of here!"
     "OK"
     "Hyyaaahhhhh"
     "Hunter are my eyes playing tricks on me or i' dat Jonny?"
     "Uh whoa......Jon-,"Hunter said as he fell off  Carl.
     "Guys what up?"

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