Wednesday, November 13, 2013

The Red Land: Chapter 10

"I DON'T KNOW HOW TO KILL THEM!" I shouted.
"I thought I showed you." Victoria said. ''I'll show you again.  Just stab it through the heart, and you will break the psychic connection.  They will just go back to being dead."
"Ok?" Joey replied.
"C'mon." Victoria said; wafting her arm towards the corpsemen.
I got ready.  I pulled out my knife, and ran towards the corpsemen.

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