I stabbed one in the heart, and saw him drop to the ground. I grabbed his sword, and picked them off one by one. I threw two swords to Joey and Victoria. Joey hesitated to attack them; by the time he started running towards them, Victoria and I were about a fourth through the army. Joey caught up to us, and we started getting through them faster.
Halfway through, we started getting out of breath. We ran back about ten feet and stopped for a couple of seconds.
"We have to kill so many!"Joey panted.
"You've killed two." I replied.
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