I jolted as I sat up wherever I was. I looked around but saw nothing but whiteness. Then a portal opened up above my head!"What the heck is that?" I asked myself confused. Suddenly a little guy fell out and landed in my lap."Who the heck are you?" I asked.
"I'm you," he replied, then he floated up and started to shine. I had to shield my eyes as he said "I'm turning into myself," he said. When he landed he looked just like me! He had my hair my skin tone my eye color. Only he had one extra thing. Wings. Two wings coming out of his back!
"What th- what are you?" I asked him.
"I'm your guardian angel Gavin," he said. I was in shock. A guardian angel, no memory, what is happening to me?
"Hello Gavin. Don't be scared for I am the goddess of light, Palutena!" Palutena said.
"Oh my gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooosh!!" I screamed "I'm getting out of here now!" I ran toward the edge of the whiteness and jumped! I fell to my doom but then I saw myself falling down a clifside, then something with red skin
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