Tuesday, December 17, 2013


Homeless Part 1

 

          I live in a tree, by myself. I ran away because my brother, Will, died. My parents said they care more about Will than they care about me. I told them I would run away and they didn't care, so here I am writing about my life in the forest.

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            I  live by myself, but I don't. Let me explain that concept. I live with a wolf. A nice one, mind you. I named him Will. I think you know where I got that from. Will comes whenever I whistle. This time he didn't come. I kept whistling for about seven more minutes when I heard a gunshot. Then I saw Will limping towards me, with a man right behind him. "STOP!" I shouted. The man looked at me, and just by the way he looked at me, I could tell he was drunk. 

            I ran up to him, throwing stones ,when he dropped his gun. I shot him in the head to finish him, and we ate him for dinner. I found out he ate twenty-two slices of pizza, and nine pieces of chocolate. I ate the chocolate, because I knew dogs were allergic to chocolate, and Will was part of the dog family. 

           

 

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  1. AnonymousDecember 23, 2013 at 4:38 PM

    cannibal!!!
    -Esther

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  2. AnonymousMarch 19, 2014 at 11:49 AM

    hey its mathew i really like your drama in this story but if you could add a little bit more detail it would be amazing

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  3. AnonymousApril 9, 2014 at 11:58 AM

    very intrested in this story,although it is kind of confusing:|
    -speedy gonzales

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