Wednesday, January 22, 2014

The Tale of the Flying Pig Part One

SPUTTER,SPUTTER,then Pig's car engine died, "oh no," Pig exclaimed obviously frustrated.( He has wings, but he doesn't want to waste his energy.)(By the way, every animal had wings in Pig City) He just went to the grocery store to buy some supplies for his trip to the solar system. A few weeks ago,the mayor of Pig City wanted Pig to collect gasses & rocks from the planets, so that they can put them on display in the Pig Museum. The mayor said that there would be a prize of $1,000,000, then suddenly the mayor's face lit up, "and......." he started to say, "you can bring a assistant," he finished. Now the Big Bad Pig heard of this, and he was the town's worse villain, and he was related to the The Big Bad Wolf. He plotted a "million" plans but the best one was :

1. Pig would be on Pluto
2. Pig would collect the rocks on Pluto
3. He would kill Pig
4. He would announce the news to the town
5. He would take the money
6. He would be RICH!

3 comments:

  1. You made a really funny story. It is really good - Adria

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  2. Your story is so intresting I love when the pig goes to Mercury and when he's driving at the beginning!!!!Reagan

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