Thursday, January 16, 2014

Hatsune Miku part 4

Hatsune miku had been running for the past hour. It was no use. Suddenly, she saw her grandmothers house. She pulled out the list. There it was. 3. Jewelry once from a loved one. She ran inside to see, nothing. Her grandmother had died the past year. All Hatsune Miku saw was a ring. "Yes!'' she shouted . It was her grandmothers wedding ring. She had collected one item. Two more to go.
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  1. UnknownJanuary 17, 2014 at 7:14 AM

    I am loving how you are developing the character alongside all of the action that is happening in this piece. Love the videos as well :)

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