Then Rachel got out of the car. The man took her to a strange house. Then she got taken to a fridgerator. The strange man moved the friderator and the girl saw a pit with 4 girls about her age yelling and screaming. The man threw her in the pit that was 7 feet and was covered in extra smooth dirt. Everyone started introducing themselves. The names of the girls were Sydeny, Katy, hanah, and Bella. Every day was a new day with new plans on how to escape, but all of the plans failed. Once they got their food they started eating and themselves. Rachel saw a girl coming towards her and asked, "what's wrong?" Rachel got angry and punched the ground and felt something hollow. Rachel started digging and saw a wooden trap door that led to a tunnel. They opened the trap door and went into a deep, and dark tunnel.
To be continued...
Wednesday, February 12, 2014
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Um, no offense but you need some capitalization and 'hanah' is normally spelled Hannah, 'Sydeny' is usually Sydney. That's all.
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