Wednesday, February 12, 2014

                         The Fire Palace 

                            Chapter 1

    No one saw it coming but me...
All I did was have a realistic dream. A really realistic dream. I dreamt about a sorceress. The sorceress was a princess, our princess of Trigon. I had no idea of what she was doing there or why she was there, but there was no way of telling what will happen next.
   Hi! My name is Avery. Avery Tridon. Moving on, That very next day it started to happen. My dream. It was 20 degrees outside and the snow began to melt. The people of Trigon think the snow is melting in this weather because of the fire falling from the princess' window. No one knew how or why it was happening, but it was.
  

           AT THE CASTLE IN TRIGON.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Princess. Time to get ready for the day you get to go play. Before your parents died they said you'd have to do this. They want you to have fun!" That was the royal adviser, Max Freeman. "MAX!!! Go away! I'm up and getting dressed." The princess was ready, ready to get out there.       

    

                                          
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2014 at 11:48 AM

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2014 at 11:51 AM

    I like your dialouge


    -Sophia

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