Wednesday, February 12, 2014
Warriors storys #2
Fireheart woke up to see Greystripe at his side. "Gahh!'' Spat Fireheart. "Everything all right?'' Mewed Greystripe. "Yes, I'm fine." Said Fireheart walking out.
"Your closest mate will do something unexpected." Whispered Fireheart to himself. Fireheart walked out of the Gorse tunnel that lead out of camp to go hunting. He brought back a chaffinch, a Vole , and a Squirrel. He went over to the apprentice den and brought Cloudpaw, Fireheart's apprentice to the training hollow until it happend. Thunder Clan's worst nightmare came true. Tigerstar had come back to attack the camp!
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